A sculpture of Vampire head *

[m.ramdan]

السلام عليكم و رحمه الله و بركاته
هذه منحوته لرأس مصاص دماء
العمل بحمد الله تعالى ...تم على المايا و الزى براش
شكرا.. :)
همسه..:)
(انا كنت مستخدم للسوفت امج لذلك اعتبر نفسى واحد منكم و لى الحق بالمشاركه هنا ابضا فالسوفت امج كان احد اسباب تطورى فى مجال الاورجانك مودلنج..محمد على رمضان)

http://img01.picoodle.com/img/img01/3/10/7/f_a1copym_f59eed7.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/3/10/7/f_a1copym_f59eed7.jpg&srv=img01)


http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/6985/91963877jy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/91963877jy3.jpg/1/w1560.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img146/91963877jy3.jpg/1/)


http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/4796/55660185dd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/55660185dd5.jpg/1/w1106.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img528/55660185dd5.jpg/1/)


http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/3069/89814993oz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/89814993oz1.jpg/1/w1106.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img91/89814993oz1.jpg/1/)

[chocobo2k]

عمل قوي لكن الخامات للأسنان و اللثة غير موجودة و ليس هنالك لسان و لا للخلفية السوداء !

[labwizard]

mmm,
first of all it is a great work but hopefully it is a work in progress not a final picture,
i loved the propotions and anatomy and the details
i have few comments though,
the shader is not giving the model a great look, in fact it needs to be more lit and less darkened i understand you want to make it scary but you are loosing a lot of interesting details in this lighting setup
some smoothing or further subdivision is needed, look at the ear part, it is faceted
next IT IS TOOO SYMMETRICAL, :) and it really bothers, especially at the nose part, try braking the symmetry by adding extra wrinkles and details to one part plus modifying the geometry in other parts
and i would loved to see the evel eyes of this vampire

good luck waiting for version 2 of this vampire, i think it is a good piece.,

[m.ramdan]

عمل قوي لكن الخامات للأسنان و اللثة غير موجودة و ليس هنالك لسان و لا للخلفية السوداء !

thnx mate there no textuers here this render dont in zbrush

[m.ramdan]

mmm,
first of all it is a great work but hopefully it is a work in progress not a final picture,
i loved the propotions and anatomy and the details
i have few comments though,
the shader is not giving the model a great look, in fact it needs to be more lit and less darkened i understand you want to make it scary but you are loosing a lot of interesting details in this lighting setup
some smoothing or further subdivision is needed, look at the ear part, it is faceted
next IT IS TOOO SYMMETRICAL, :) and it really bothers, especially at the nose part, try braking the symmetry by adding extra wrinkles and details to one part plus modifying the geometry in other parts
and i would loved to see the evel eyes of this vampire

good luck waiting for version 2 of this vampire, i think it is a good piece.,

ooo man
u seems that u r a real artist :)
i love ur comments abt my model
all wt u said ..i agree with u dude
and i will keep it in my miend for sure
also i would love to say i didnt bring this model to maya and render it
no no the render dont in zbrush and for u i will upload anther img to show more interstinf details
and i start doing some textuering tests now and i will put my finals or version 2 in an new thread ..hope u like it

[m.ramdan]

i did upload the other imgs up there
take a look plz

[m.ramdan]

also cuz am not using xsi for this project
i dont think its a good idea to open my WIP HERE
so if any one wanna take a look to it
u can visit it in cgtalk

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=5430670#post5430670

[labwizard]

:)
we are all real artists and forums like these help us better "sculpt" our creativity and technique.

Mohammad, i checked your thread on cgsociety, and checked out the textured /rendered version with SSS, of course it is lot better than the first preview.
one comment i would suggest the bkg to be at night (full moon), fits better the vampire than hell (fire theme) he is different than a demon unless you want to change that.

regards,

[m.ramdan]

Aha cool I will keep that in my mind bro

[chocobo2k]

Yeah, I agree with what has been said

[m.ramdan]

nice :)